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Hmm her species will probably appear in Solstice & Equinox... I'll make a new design for the character!
I came up with this because I had nothing to draw OTL
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Okay dude, y'know I love you and you're work, so don't be mad at me. XDD

Now, this is a very lovely piece showing some flow with the lighter objects in the picture, but with a very static and stiff pose, which doesn't make much sense in my opinion. Perhaps you should experiment with a slightly more dynamic yet elegant pose for this character, if you ever draw her in the future. I would love to see that!

As usual, your skill and technique with the brush stokes is AMAZING as usual, but like I mentioned before the issue both you and I share, is lack of shadow definition. To be specific;
- Between the legs, tail, and body, and the tail coming out from behind her left leg.
- Between the arms and dress.
-Between the leaves in the background and the dress.

These areas could use some more dark shades to differentiate them and create more depth. Also, a little bit on the shoulders and under the hair, and the vest (unless it's tight, I can't tell) could use a little shadow too.

However, I see you've improved and followed that with the areas with a bit more depth, such as the neck, lower arms, and legs coming out from under the dress.

This piece has a bit of symmetry going on in it, which is offset by the hair, flowers in the back, and leaves here and there; but they're mostly on the right side, which throws me off a little. The left side feels quite empty. Also, the concentration of the small leaves on her legs seem a bit too uniform, so adding a few more in farther or closer spots would add a little more variety.

Overall, still a wonderful piece with a wonderful character with an artists with a bunch of wonderful ideas. :3 That is all!